Here's one online that we have used in the past. Tryout Evaluation Form
I would never let a dad see an eval form, nothing good can come from that.I love the mechanics part of that form. I guess that is going to be a rather personal preference box... as the pitching and hitting forums can't agree on a specific style being good or bad, right or wrong... it kind of makes me laugh to think about a coach marking that down and letting a dad see it. I'm guessing many a father and coach might start throwing punches on the spot!