FiveFrameSwing
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You are both correct in your assessment of a knob to the ball mentality, that's what the head coach was teaching us last year. At this point what I'm gathering is that the rotation of her body that is currently present is a result of her initiating the swing with her hands. By teaching her to initiate the swing with her lower body, it will promote connection of the rear elbow with the shoulders. We want the arm movement to be the result of the rotation, not the cause of the rotation, correct?
Yes, the "knob to the ball" mentality is evident in your daughter's swing. MTS, as usual, made a good post explaining that a "barrel to the ball" mentality is more appropriate.
Here is Tewks' demonstration comparing "barrel to the ball" versus "knob to the ball".
As for your description ... you are very close. We want the "initial" lowering of the rear upper arm (inclusive of the rear elbow) to be a result of the lower core rotating ahead of the upper body. The "rear hip" will basically grab the "rear shoulder" ... and that won't happen if the arms/shoulders lead.