Yeah that's not bad verbiage. I'd encourage everyone to refer back frequently to the hitters on Siggy's site comparing what they are doing to what all of us on here are saying. Siggy's Hitting Clips - ImageEvent
check out the troy glaus video on hitting low pitches - his elbow never goes above his front shoulder and it stays bent and in a downward position in follow through
his swing is built to hit HR... everyone is different based on their approach - imho there is more than one way to approach a pitch and everybody is different based on body build, bat speed, etc