Carly
Pitching Coach
Everyone has made good points so far about the leg work and the glove hand, and those things are definitely worth working on. I'm also seeing a very stiff armed release. She has a bit of internal rotation in the wrist, but she's keeping her whole arm straight. She needs more of a whipping action. Check out this video of Yukiko Ueno and take a look at the differences between her arm action and your daughter's arm action:
Japanese Softball - YouTube
You want to shoot for a fast, loose, rubbery arm.
Japanese Softball - YouTube
You want to shoot for a fast, loose, rubbery arm.