Jeff
I don't think she is to far off. She is definitely getting the brush trigger......my personal preference would be that her forearm stabilize against her thigh a little lower on the forearm...maybe 3 inches above the wrist. Here are some pics of brush trigger/stabilization that may help. Not sure what pitch your DD was throwing in the pic, but if it was a dropball it appears that her index finger may be moving toward the inside of the ball and be compromising a 12/6 spin axis. Does she get some gyro spin on her drop?
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