Would this be what you advocate for an inside pitch?
The two swings look very different mechanically. Are you advocating a completely different swing for 'outside' versus 'inside' pitches?
Am i understanding that you would like to not lower the barrel so soon, fight to keep the barrel up and hands loaded?
The demonstration by bustos and drill i use to teach turning more for inside pitches, IS lacking the barrel load, so it might look not right for some with OCD, but the hand load/ barrel load instruction cost extra.