Not bad imo.I like the modified stepback in the gather phase. Nolan Arenado does the same.,great for rhythm.
Posture isn’t being maintained long enough. Gertrude said ‘hold the coil’. Same difference. That should get her off her backside at the same time, every time. Which should cure the ‘uphill’ attack angle.
Probably has timing issues periodically.
Not bad James. Your dd looks athletic.