I've actually thought about one day "planning" to have kids around January 2nd, to give them that age leeway.
October 28th is no good. She needs to wait until Jan. 2nd. My DD birthday is October 28th and she had to play up an age group from her classmates. She missed starting Kindergarten by a couple of months and then also missed the ASA age cutoff by a couple of months.
I like her hand position...but her shoulders should be more open when she is at 12:00