#14's dad,
It looks like her stride foot went too high in the air and came down pretty hard. I like the stride out like your striding on this ICE approach. To me the length of the stride is perfect but try to have her stride like she is striding on thin ice. I hope this helps.
Sean
Like this? Photo 3 of 16, ULL vs. UNT
Yes. Part of that is arm action and part of it is posture and rotation problems.#14's dad, In the second clip, more than anything else I see her front elbow going down instead of going up resulting in a downward swing.