Thanks! She is a pitcher too.....soooo finding the time and good hitting coach that fits into her schedule is tough!
All back/sway, reach with the front foot/leg and swing with the arms. Sequence or lack of a sequence is off. Needs to use her rear side or at least her core. A to C swing not a down to and up through swing. That being said get a 'good' hitting instructor (good luck) or learn as much as YOU can and your DD could be a really good hitter. DD has the makings of a good swing.
Just think if your DD knew how to 'stay back'/get 'sat' what she would have been able to do to this pitch.