I think the sequence is off a little but want to see what the more trained eyes see. Please let me know if she is turning the barrel correctly. Much appreciated. https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=PNx3PgE3Cyc
For whatever reason that video is no longer on his twitter feed.Teacherman put out the video a couple of weeks ago. Maybe Patar can post a link I believe he has it.
I am just a novice at analyzing video but she seems to be swinging with her arms and not getting much help from her core or torso. She gathers herself back and seems to do okay with removing slack but when she launches she rotates the torso directly into the incoming pitch. IMO she needs to work on launching the swing INTO her pull back without actively rotating out of it. Tilt will be needed to accomplish this. Since she is a right handed hitter her slack removal or pull back should put the shoulder line in a direction of the second baseman's position and she should launch the swing with that direction in mind. I believe you should watch the video about creating a corner (which I believe she is doing) and launching behind that corner (which she isn't doing). Teacherman put out the video a couple of weeks ago. Maybe Patar can post a link I believe he has it.
Thanks for all responses. DrDrodd or patter do either of you know how I can get that link you spoke of?