Here's a good example of ads I see:
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We are looking for skilled athletes who can play multiple positions at a high level. All positions are open for competition. Private workouts can be arranged by request. Our primary needs include:
Pitcher- capable of consistently throwing 60+ with control & command of multiple pitches
Catcher- sub 2.0 pop time with excellent blocking and framing technique
Lead off/ Slapper- exceptional speed & high on base percentage
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OK, listen, I know this coach and this team. They pretty much stunk it up on the field last year. Like going 0-5 in tournaments. He was playing in A-level tournaments, but did not have the talent to back it up, I don't think. I understand he's reaching for the moon, but there just aren't dozens and dozens of girls out there who meet those criteria. And if they did, it's unlikely they'd join this team. They'd be on a proven winning team.
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We are looking for skilled athletes who can play multiple positions at a high level. All positions are open for competition. Private workouts can be arranged by request. Our primary needs include:
Pitcher- capable of consistently throwing 60+ with control & command of multiple pitches
Catcher- sub 2.0 pop time with excellent blocking and framing technique
Lead off/ Slapper- exceptional speed & high on base percentage
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OK, listen, I know this coach and this team. They pretty much stunk it up on the field last year. Like going 0-5 in tournaments. He was playing in A-level tournaments, but did not have the talent to back it up, I don't think. I understand he's reaching for the moon, but there just aren't dozens and dozens of girls out there who meet those criteria. And if they did, it's unlikely they'd join this team. They'd be on a proven winning team.
