Much better. Wish they were closer, but understand the privacy issue. It will be much easier to point out some things to work on from these side views.
A poster on this forum once said something very helpful for me....I wish I knew who it was so that I could thank them....But the poster said that it is much easier to communicate what to do instead of repeating what not to do. Plus telling your dd what to do comes across more positive instead stating what NOT to do. So instead of giving cues like don't lean forward just give her the cue like keep you chin up....kinda hard to have bad posture with your chin up....or stick the pitch like a gyminist instead of saying don't walk through your pitch. I am not an expert....just a parent of a dd that's learning how to pitch.