Need to get the barrel turned into (behind) the rear hip. With the current set up the barrel is being turned around the hip and getting out front too quickly.
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Not positive what you mean - you know we have 47 different terms for the same movement on here!! The way I understand what you're saying is it needs to be a little more of hips first, then hands - is that right? If that's it, it's hard to get our batters to do it in a drill - hips start - pause - hands thru - and then explain to them that it's only a fraction of a second. Or are we talking simply making an adjustment of the bat during initial bat tilt?
Something I see in both of them - their front arm seems to straighten out a bit at the start of the swing. The result of that is the circular bat path, correct? If so, maybe work some one arm drills? They seem to both lose the arm box/ front elbow bend a little.