I think she looks much better here. One thing that stands out to me, that should be an easy fix, is her landing. I think she's trying to hard to come down on the front of her foot (toes), and it's overly cushioning her landing. I feel with this particular set of drive mechanics that I'd have her try to get more of a mid-foot landing (think more like flat-footed). And, in doing that, work to get that front leg to firm up just a tad more just prior to release.
Also, while her arm is bent at the elbow going into release, she's not really feeling the full extent of the whipping action of the forearm. She needs to feel the brush interference a bit more. It would help her get her upper arm fully stopped for a split second to intensify the pendulum action of the forearm and end of the whip (i.e., the hand).
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